My experince in Rio de Janeiro

How would you feel about it? I will tell you how I lived my holidays in Rio de Janeiro. I will also tell you how people see the city.
I went to Rio last summerwith my cousins and my grandma. There I learn new cultures, and some words in Portuguese. What I saw was a beautiful country but I also found some problems like the favellas and the crime.
In my opinion, favellas are a problem but not such big as people think. They are the place where poor people found an opportunity of having a better life. At the beggining of this paragraph I mention that favellas are a problem. This is because near favellas, there is more crime. Fortunately I visited favellas and did not suffer any crime but if that had happened to me I would have been sacared and never gone back to that place.
I think that Rio de Janeiro is a beautiful city and I would go back because I had really a good time. The people are amazing and in my mind there will be many good memories from that trip.
In conclusion, many people say that Rio de Janeiro has many problems but every place has them. Rio de Janeiro is beautiful in many ways.